caliente_uk: (xandersmile by restlessvision)
caliente_uk ([personal profile] caliente_uk) wrote2006-03-23 10:52 pm
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FitB

Set some time in between "Beneath You" and "Him".




"Spike has a soul now."

"Spike has a what now?" Xander looked at Buffy in disbelief. "How can that be possible?"

"He got it in Africa...for me."

"But why would he do that, Buffy?" Xander asked, stunned.

"To be a better man...to be what I deserve."

Xander could see by Buffy's tear streaked face that she was as stunned by this as he was.

He couldn't believe he was going to say this. "How can I help?"

Buffy looked at him in relief. "Can he come and stay with you?"

Xander sighed. He couldn't stand the vampire, but for some strange reason he felt compelled to do this.

"Yes."
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[personal profile] jerusha 2006-03-23 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice. I really like this conversation. It makes a lot of sense.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for taking the time to read my little drabble. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[identity profile] sharelle.livejournal.com 2006-03-23 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw! *melts* That was perfect! What a lovely transition to what we saw on-screen.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Sharelle. It's a scene I would have loved to have seen in the show. :)

[identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com 2006-03-23 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah so that's how that conversation went. Very deftly done, enjoyed that.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[identity profile] bluekaty.livejournal.com 2006-03-23 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice, thank you. I love the bits of fiction that fill the space between episodes

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I love FitB fic. I'm still very new to writing (even drabbles!), so I really appreciate the feedback. :)

[identity profile] petzipellepingo.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
Xander could see by Buffy's tear streaked face that she was as stunned by this as he was.

He couldn't believe he was going to say this. "How can I help?"

Nods. Yes that's pretty much how I imagine things went. Very nice.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It's a scene I would have loved to have seen in the show. :)

[identity profile] spikesdeb.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely! I can see this conversation happening. Thanks for sharing Cal.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:35 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading, Deb. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

*hugs*

[identity profile] spikendru.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
*nods nods nods*

Yep. That's exactly what happened. Great job!

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for taking the time to read! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[identity profile] authoressnebula.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
That was just perfect; I could see this truly happening in the series. Wonderful job sweetie.

*hughughug* Sending hugs to you and your daughter; hope all goes well. Keeping you guys in my thoughts and prayers.

~Nebula

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Nebula. This is a scene I would have loved to have seen in the show. I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thank you so much for the thoughts, prayers and hugs. I really do appreciate it. *many hugs*

[identity profile] karinalee.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
*sigh* Lovely scene, Cal.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Grandma Karen. *smooches you*

[identity profile] prophcygrl.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
So lovely, really enjoyed this. Would have been nice to see in canon! *hugs*

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. *hugs*
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[identity profile] kazzy-cee.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely Cal!! Fills a little gap - I imagine this happening in the church, or on Xander's doorstep.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Karen. I really appreciate the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)
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[identity profile] alwaysjbj.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:06 am (UTC)(link)
*waves* Have friended you back. I look forward to getting to know you.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
*waves back* I'm looking forward to getting to know you, too! :)

[identity profile] talesofspike.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice, and so easy to imagine Xander forcing himself to be nice despite his natural inclinations.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-28 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[identity profile] girlmacbeth.livejournal.com 2006-03-24 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
You should of been a btvs writer on the show you know how to make things so perfect way to go really loved it too hee

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-28 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Melanie. :)

[identity profile] timeofchange.livejournal.com 2006-03-25 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Perfectly perfect.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-28 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] fer1213.livejournal.com 2006-03-25 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
This is excellent, Cal! I can totally believe Xander and Buffy had this conversation.

[identity profile] caliente-uk.livejournal.com 2006-03-28 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, Fer. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
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[identity profile] lmbossy.livejournal.com 2006-04-02 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
He couldn't believe he was going to say this. "How can I help?"
love it!